Comments on: Another polishing pass http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2007/09/18/another-polishing-pass/ an animation workbook Tue, 30 Sep 2008 23:38:27 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: christian rubino http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2007/09/18/another-polishing-pass/#comment-52 christian rubino Thu, 20 Sep 2007 13:14:30 +0000 http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2007/09/18/another-polishing-pass/#comment-52 hey dude. just so u know me and a friend (we studied together) saw this and thought it was great, great eye movements! we both thought the door handle hold was a little too long, my friend said "it didnt feel hot" hmmm, just my opinion ok? (and im not positive of the style you are after) but here goes: 18:18->19:00 is a strange stand up, the beginning pose 18:18/18:19 is unstable (foot position vs center of gravity) and would fall in direction of the door but manages to move in the other direction to stand at 19:00, which is a strong, low fight or flight stance. 19:13->19:20 both feet pivot, dono feels little strange, like slipery floor. 21:18->21:23 weight foot slides i understand that because the stance is so wide , low and extreme that it is difficult to stick feet without the legs breaking, personally i believe "only pivot/slide the foot without the weight on it" sliding or pivoting a flat foot that has all the body weight would have a lot of friction and make it very difficult (unless its a slipery floor) + you would require to brace your position with another point (another foot or hand) to get the leverage/torque to overcome the friction. 21:12->22:01 long time for hand contact for doorknob burn/reaction, but it can happen that it takes time before we understand that we have been burnt so its ok (im just a little unsure) I think that if you burn yourself by closing your hand, the automatic instinct will open your fingers as trying to let go (its an involuntary thing, automatic, subconcious) and probably flick the hand high (above head) and as far away from the door as possible (the hind brain / instinctual animal part of our brain responsible for survival is not so logical, it reacts slightly irrationaly) even the spine / shoulders would try to help remove the hand from the danger, mebe a weight shift away as well? 24:01 pose is soo very low and only 1 leg propels the body up in2 the jump, mebe a tiny recoil when the extiguisher fires (would show a lot for force being expeled) sorry to nit pick, and most of this stuff only shows up on frame by frame scrub. i only get this picky with people who i think have abuility and talent anyhow im very impressed! i think that its great and that you are improving out of sight. xian hey dude.

just so u know me and a friend (we studied together) saw this and thought it was great, great eye movements! we both thought the door handle hold was a little too long, my friend said “it didnt feel hot”

hmmm, just my opinion ok? (and im not positive of the style you are after) but here goes:
18:18->19:00 is a strange stand up, the beginning pose 18:18/18:19 is unstable (foot position vs center of gravity) and would fall in direction of the door but manages to move in the other direction to stand at 19:00, which is a strong, low fight or flight stance.

19:13->19:20 both feet pivot, dono feels little strange, like slipery floor.

21:18->21:23 weight foot slides

i understand that because the stance is so wide , low and extreme that it is difficult to stick feet without the legs breaking, personally i believe “only pivot/slide the foot without the weight on it” sliding or pivoting a flat foot that has all the body weight would have a lot of friction and make it very difficult (unless its a slipery floor) + you would require to brace your position with another point (another foot or hand) to get the leverage/torque to overcome the friction.

21:12->22:01 long time for hand contact for doorknob burn/reaction, but it can happen that it takes time before we understand that we have been burnt so its ok (im just a little unsure)

I think that if you burn yourself by closing your hand, the automatic instinct will open your fingers as trying to let go (its an involuntary thing, automatic, subconcious) and probably flick the hand high (above head) and as far away from the door as possible (the hind brain / instinctual animal part of our brain responsible for survival is not so logical, it reacts slightly irrationaly) even the spine / shoulders would try to help remove the hand from the danger, mebe a weight shift away as well?

24:01 pose is soo very low and only 1 leg propels the body up in2 the jump,

mebe a tiny recoil when the extiguisher fires (would show a lot for force being expeled)

sorry to nit pick, and most of this stuff only shows up on frame by frame scrub. i only get this picky with people who i think have abuility and talent

anyhow im very impressed! i think that its great and that you are improving out of sight.

xian

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