Shot dilemma

Posted by Avner Engel in Animation

I just wanted to share a dilemma of mine in regards to the sequencing at the end of the second scene I animated over the past few days.

I am attaching here two files with different sequencing at the end. I am unsure which one to choose from; one is based on the story board I did (the split screen ending) and the other has cuts between the different camera angles.
At the moment I am leaning towards the ending with the cuts. The continuity reads better for me.

If you ask yourself what am I trying to achieve out of the shots well the answer is simple, empathy.

My aim is that the audience would empathies with the character by showing the conflict he has with his objective of getting the paper.

It will be great if you can have a quick look whenever you can and share your thoughts with me.

Thanks in advance.

This is the version with the cuts towards the end

This is the version based on the story board