Quick update of my shot, two more days to go until it’s due. I am trying to tackle last major issues but overall now it’s all about making all the expressions and the energy flow in a very fluid manner.
If you see anything that stand out to you, please drop me a line and let me know.
Nice work, Avner!
This is looking really good! Sorry for the late crit. I’ve been on holiday in Thialand. I think overall you’ve done really well… so you can be really pleased with the results! Yeah, maybe the eye thing… but I know you were going for a certain read.
I like the arm offset at the end… and it flows a lot better now. Maybe just when his arms come up around 208 they move down then back up… felt like a funny ease out…
I know it’s too late to go back now, but I get the feeling it might be stronger if you used the pose on 143 for 123 and cut out the middle bits… (at just held that pose for a stronger read) might be stronger acting wise.
I love the exaggerated feel and the energy… feels nice.
Okay, I’m done… I’m being picky mind you… but at the end of the day, you’ve done a good job… and it kept on improving… your work is imporving all the time!
Congrats and good luck with the voting!
Cheers,
Aaron