Nearly there…
Quick update of my shot, two more days to go until it’s due. I am trying to tackle last major issues but overall now it’s all about making all the expressions and the energy flow in a very fluid manner.
If you see anything that stand out to you, please drop me a line and let me know.
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Hi, my name is Avner, and I am addicted to animation!
Welcome to my work in progress animation workbook. Feel free to share ideas, thoughts, feedback or anything else that can help me evolve and further my learning. 
Nice work, Avner!
This is looking really good! Sorry for the late crit. I’ve been on holiday in Thialand. I think overall you’ve done really well… so you can be really pleased with the results! Yeah, maybe the eye thing… but I know you were going for a certain read.
I like the arm offset at the end… and it flows a lot better now. Maybe just when his arms come up around 208 they move down then back up… felt like a funny ease out…
I know it’s too late to go back now, but I get the feeling it might be stronger if you used the pose on 143 for 123 and cut out the middle bits… (at just held that pose for a stronger read) might be stronger acting wise.
I love the exaggerated feel and the energy… feels nice.
Okay, I’m done… I’m being picky mind you… but at the end of the day, you’ve done a good job… and it kept on improving… your work is imporving all the time!
Congrats and good luck with the voting!
Cheers,
Aaron