This is looking really good! Sorry for the late crit. I’ve been on holiday in Thialand. I think overall you’ve done really well… so you can be really pleased with the results! Yeah, maybe the eye thing… but I know you were going for a certain read.

I like the arm offset at the end… and it flows a lot better now. Maybe just when his arms come up around 208 they move down then back up… felt like a funny ease out…

I know it’s too late to go back now, but I get the feeling it might be stronger if you used the pose on 143 for 123 and cut out the middle bits… (at just held that pose for a stronger read) might be stronger acting wise.

I love the exaggerated feel and the energy… feels nice.

Okay, I’m done… I’m being picky mind you… but at the end of the day, you’ve done a good job… and it kept on improving… your work is imporving all the time!

Congrats and good luck with the voting!

Cheers,

Aaron