Comments on: Final revision for March 11 second club http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/04/16/final-revision-for-march-11-second-club/ an animation workbook Fri, 21 Nov 2008 21:15:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Aaron http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/04/16/final-revision-for-march-11-second-club/#comment-104 Aaron Thu, 17 Apr 2008 13:02:48 +0000 http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/04/16/final-revision-for-march-11-second-club/#comment-104 Nice man, You've put a lot of work into this... it's looking good. I know this is the final, but thought I'd give a couple of quick thoughts... I might make two changes... probably wouldn't rub his chest with his right hand... is better to just leave by his side. (that way you show him thinking more...less distracting)... I like the left hand guesture... just feels late... needs to happen on 'Music' or there abouts... that's all I'd change. Good work all around, man consider this one done! Nice job! Aaron Nice man,

You’ve put a lot of work into this… it’s looking good. I know this is the final, but thought I’d give a couple of quick thoughts… I might make two changes… probably wouldn’t rub his chest with his right hand… is better to just leave by his side. (that way you show him thinking more…less distracting)… I like the left hand guesture… just feels late… needs to happen on ‘Music’ or there abouts… that’s all I’d change.

Good work all around, man consider this one done!

Nice job!

Aaron

]]> By: chakri http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/04/16/final-revision-for-march-11-second-club/#comment-103 chakri Wed, 16 Apr 2008 09:19:36 +0000 http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/04/16/final-revision-for-march-11-second-club/#comment-103 hi there, iam not at all perfect animator but i will try to figure out.in ur animation everything looks good if i watch the animation without sound. so character actions are not matching beats of voice. BUT is perfect as it is....in this word....as it is action is missing.means u should push the pose more when the word as it is comes. all the best and keep animating. bye hi there,
iam not at all perfect animator but i will try to figure out.in ur animation everything looks good if i watch the animation without sound.
so character actions are not matching beats of voice.
BUT is perfect as it is….in this word….as it is action is missing.means u should push the pose more when the word as it is comes.
all the best and keep animating.
bye

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