I think functionally, it works. It reads and flows well. Still not sure about the flight through the air to the box… maybe it’s just me… but feels as though he pauses unnecessarily… know what I mean? This is being picky, but the tempo of the shuffle backwards is all the same… not that noticable…but maybe more texture there.

Ok, I’m being really picky here… It’s looking good, Avner.

Aaron