In this pass, I was really trying to push the poses a bit more. In areas where the animation looked a bit too rough, I drew over the drawings that were there and made the poses read a bit better.
Another things I looked at at this pass was retaining the volume and the overall shape or more like proportions of the flour sack.
There are still a couple of things I need to tweak but overall I still its slowly getting there.
Hi Avner,
I think functionally, it works. It reads and flows well. Still not sure about the flight through the air to the box… maybe it’s just me… but feels as though he pauses unnecessarily… know what I mean? This is being picky, but the tempo of the shuffle backwards is all the same… not that noticable…but maybe more texture there.
Ok, I’m being really picky here… It’s looking good, Avner.
Aaron