After working on the first pass of this swing test, it felt like I rushed into uploading my progress. However it was essential for my learning process. The lesson I have learned here was to take the time when planning a shot.
There were many things I weren’t happy about like the disproportion in the volume of the shapes, the way the vine swings, drag, stretch and overlaps, and a few more issues. Thanks to some great feedback from my peers I managed to look into those things and push them a little bit more.
Any thoughts, comments and feedback are welcome.
Ok now its better, you could have bit more dyanmic landing too.
Thanks J, could you please elaborate a bit more on what you mean by dynamic landing?
Do you mean I should push the weight in the landing a bit more?