Not too bad… it’s kinda hard to critique much with it in blocking mode. Not sure… the hands spend a lot of time in the air… maybe vary that some what… just an idea.

Aaron

Nice blocking, really solid start =)
Keep in mind while you move from your first pass blocking to your next that you could play a little more with the characters pelvis, it would be nice to feel the weight shift better when he steps from one leg to thee other. Also check your “Center of Gravity” for you “story telling poses” the could shoot a little more past its rest position then come back to feel the weight a little better.
One last thing is I’m sure you’ll do this when you break it down but maybe don’t have everything happen on the same key, like when he moves back from one side to the other keep the hands in the clap position to give a little feeling of pull and drag.
Good luck, looks Great!!!!!
J.