Test your rage – Final

3 Comments

1. 

   toyBunny | August 26, 2008 at 12:55

   Hey Avner,
   I think it’s pretty funny. Keep up the good work!

2. 

   Franko | August 31, 2008 at 22:07

   Hey Av

   I really like all the preparatory character acting to the hammer lift. It’s an appealing animation sequence well done. Better than I could produce that is for sure , so my ongoing critique holds no water.

   I still reckon he’s not working hard enough against the momentum of the heavy hammer head, though. He remains central and upright, where I think he’d be bending away a bit more to counteract the swing. I still think of a hammer throw at the Olympics, but that’s a big guy and small weight, probably a pair of dancers is a better example where the girl is in a lift leaning out from the boy spinning in the centre of the circle. The reversal of direction in the hammer at fr. 287 still would need a lot more effort to convince me of the hammer’s weight. It would take a lot of effort and leaning in the opposite direction to reverse that momentum and I would expect a big wide arc as the character finally overcomes the obstacle.

   That’s what I got for you. I hope you pointed us at this one because you wanted a bit more crit?

3. 

   Renato | September 4, 2008 at 14:08

   Really great man!
   I love the animation, very well done!
   congats!