Shot update – more polishing
Some more polishing, although there is still a long way to go and a lot of work to be done I am slowly getting there (on the expanse of my sleeping hours!) 
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Hi, my name is Avner, and I am addicted to animation!
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Awesome! I like it so much, so funny. The take of the older man is great. Good job
Hey Avner,
I’m really liking what you’re doing here. The only comment would be this: The first thing I see is that his right arm, when he goes to grab the handle, seem to speed up just before he grabs and then stops abruptly, subtle, but it’s there. I stepped frame by frame and I noticed that your spacing increases a bit which might be the reason for why I see what I see. As I was watching for this, I realized that as an alternative, you might have him reach up with his left first and grab the closer handle and then when he turns, he swings his right arm to grab the further handle (closer and further from the side he came from). Just a thought. But overall, it’s looking very cool. I like their attitudes… they’re clear and funny. Now, if you want to return the favor, you can tear up my exercise animation over at my website, toybunny.com. I welcome your thoughts. Thanks!
Addition to above let the hand go up first hit the handle then close. Now he has some ultra human l33tness in his coordination