Oct26 2

And a little bit more (polishing)

daniel huertas | October 27, 2008 at 00:05

hey man!!! looking great!! I really like the beggining and the newspaper guy reactions..

i would push a bit more the pose on the anticipation for the sneeze guy at frame 273 and make him lead with the knee up and then step to the side to catch the next pose..

also would like to see some sniffes before the actual sneeze… it’s happening a bit too fast the whole action.. so you could add some holds and clean up your phrasing in that hold… like “snif.. two snifs faster going up… a last long snif… and Baam!..” you know what i mean?

keep going man! looks great!
Renato Fochi | October 28, 2008 at 02:35

Really good man!! Your animations are gettin better and better!!
I agree with huertas observations!!
keep it up the good work!