My 11 Second Club Entry for December
This one is about an advertising executive who goes after his copywriter to follow up an overdue deadline.
As always, any ideas, suggestions, comments or feedback are most welcome.
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Hi, my name is Avner, and I am addicted to animation!
Welcome to my work in progress animation workbook. Feel free to share ideas, thoughts, feedback or anything else that can help me evolve and further my learning. 
Hey Avner,
Great stuff dude! You really brought those characters to life. How long did that take you? Did you use Jason Ryan’s approach? (flipbook,then maya) Did you thumbnail first? I’d love to know how you achieved this!! The only comment I have is that for some reason frames 370-371 seem to “pop” visually. Then only recommendation I have is to maybe give the head “look up” a couple more frames to settle. Keep it up!
This is looking awesome man! The last pose of the girl is awesome
. Anyhow, so one thing that I think can be tweaked is the reaction of the girl. It looks as if when she reacts to the presence of the man there, she doesn’t even look at him, and she reacts to him. Ya know what I mean? I think that she should take a look at him, and then react to him. Anyhow other than that this is really sweet stuff!
Keep it up, and keep us posted!
Nate
Really awesome shot dude, would agree with the comments of the girl reacting to the guy without actually seeing him. Alot of entries featuring toilets how odd, yours is definitely the best toilet one! great use of reflection.