Class 2 Progress Reel

3 Comments

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   Erik Westlund | September 13, 2009 at 14:27

   Hey Avner,

   It is truly great to see the progress in your skills. Too many good things to comment on here. If you are sill looking for conclusions, ask yourself questions about the character. He seems to like to do things in an athletic manner. Not just getting there but getting there with a flourish.

   Best wishes,

   -e

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   Darrell Vasquez | September 18, 2009 at 16:48

   Great stuff Av!! I absolutely love how you are making your own short with the exercises that AM is giving you! Definitely shows your story telling ability! It’s definitely hard to come up with a conclusion. Do you want to have a gag? Do you want him to get away? The agree with Erik that he probably needs to continue his ninja like stunts in whatever happens. I wish I could critic any other areas but he definitely paid attention to the small things in these ones!! Great job, Two-thumbs way up!!

   DV

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   Darrell Vasquez | September 18, 2009 at 16:54

   Well done Av! Great stuff man! Well I wish that I could find something to critic but you have definitely gone into the very small details on these exercises, great job! I love how you took some AM exercises and created this story that is so great, shows your great story telling skills! On the ending… I have to ask yourself some questions, do you want a gag at the end? Do you want him to get away? or get caught? Most importantly I agree with Erik in that you need to keep it very ninja like parkour style! Great job, two-thumbs way up!!

   DV