It’s Over – Polishing Pass
I started polishing the animation. So far I have go through the main body parts, like the spine, head, shoulders and arms and made sure the breakdowns are working and hitting they right beats.
next I am going to tackle the eyes, blinks, fingers and the ring constraints. Thus far, the keys that are there are what I laid out in the blocking.
Thanks for watching.
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Hi, my name is Avner, and I am addicted to animation!
Welcome to my work in progress animation workbook. Feel free to share ideas, thoughts, feedback or anything else that can help me evolve and further my learning. 
This is really great work Av! Can’t wait to see you add the face stuff next term! Well done!
Hi Avner!
Whoaaaaa! Beautiful work on the polishing !
I really like what you did with her right hand on “this this”. It brings the attention to the ring and the straight fingers really shows how she feels. Nice touch! I won’t have much to suggest… I think that at the beginning when she says “It’s over”, that right hand coming into the left hand, the arc could be a tiny bit more pronounced…or happen a tiny bit more before (like 2 frames?) I think that what’s catching my eye is that the whole body seems to start and finishes moving at the same time? The other thing is when she says the words “twisted, toxic thing”, the poses are really solid, but I’d have less little motion down on the holds… just to accentuate he frustration?
I hope it makes sense…. I couldn’t frame by frame it so sorry if I can’t give you a proper frame count in my comments
Really, great work!!
you’re going to do wonders in the dialog! 
Take care!
Em