Not Here – shot update

3 Comments

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   Daniel Harris | November 27, 2010 at 17:40

   Heya Av!

   This is looking absolutely superb, I think you’ve found some really great audio to work with and the background you’ve put into it with the wedding context etc, works and is really endearing. Very nice . I see you’ve been experimenting with the last bit of acting with the fella in blue reacting, and I think this is the best one yet from your other posts . I do have a tiny gripe though, I kinda wish you would hold it on that expression on 362. I don’t feel like you need that ending bit and it feels a bit out of character for me: Everything in his performance is quite emotionally strong and dramatic, but this last slumped raised brow expression on 383 kinda looks to me like he’s say “yerrr whatever dude” – maybe out of character? I’d be tempted to make the run in on 195 a little faster too to match his high tension mood too.

   Overall this is incredible work Av! I reckon it’s your best piece yet
   -Dan

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   Olivier L. | December 2, 2010 at 04:41

   really nice work man, very inspiring. I have been through all your ecrits today, one thing Mark didnt talk about and does strike me is how early Blue guy is doing his take, he is already reacting on 163 when he doesnt even know who is on the phone. I would instead wait until “big nose” says “Francis”, that would make a bit more sense to me.

   An other thing you will probably work on is the left hand posing of “big nose” after 251. I would be nice if not all the fingers overlapped visually. I would curl the pinky a tiny bit.

   Lovely work Avner!

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   Avner Engel | December 2, 2010 at 07:53

   Thanks very much Olivier, I appreciate the feedback.