Last week we had to submit our short film to school.
Although there are still things that need a lot of work and attention, (mainly on the animation side of things), we agreed we’ll be better off handing it in on time over being late.
For the time being we are going to unwind and work on some other stuff, after all the 6 weeks we spent on this project were pretty hectic for both of us.
I do intend to re-visit some of the shots and try to push the animation and the story one step further
If you have any thoughts, feedback, or constructive criticism, please do not hesitate to share it with us. We are interested to hear everything you have to say.
With one week to go before our deadline we had to start wrap things up. Although the animation, the acting and some other technical things are not quite there yet (we only had 5 weeks to work on it), we had to move on to try and finish the project.
Below is a link to the most recent version of the short. In the most recent pass we did, we added some more rendered scenes and two extra shots to complete the sequencing.
As always, comments and feedback are always welcome.
Based on the comments we received from different people I did another sequencing pass to improve the continuity and the flow of the movie.
Once again any thoughts are most welcome.
It’s been a while since the last time I updated my blog, a lot of exciting things happaned since then.
Our short film production is progressing and coming along slowly, the pressure is building up as there is not long before it’s due.
I would like to take this opportunity and post a work in progress clip of where we are at with the production.
Please bare in mind that the animation in the LAST two shots is still a work in progress and it’s not polished yet.
Please watch it and tell us what you think.
any comments or crits are most welcome.
I just wanted to share a dilemma of mine in regards to the sequencing at the end of the second scene I animated over the past few days.
I am attaching here two files with different sequencing at the end. I am unsure which one to choose from; one is based on the story board I did (the split screen ending) and the other has cuts between the different camera angles.
At the moment I am leaning towards the ending with the cuts. The continuity reads better for me.
If you ask yourself what am I trying to achieve out of the shots well the answer is simple, empathy.
My aim is that the audience would empathies with the character by showing the conflict he has with his objective of getting the paper.
It will be great if you can have a quick look whenever you can and share your thoughts with me.
Thanks in advance.
This is the version with the cuts towards the end
This is the version based on the story board
